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Sue Granzella's avatar

DANG! I'm hooked! Gripping, tense, INtense. On to part 2!!!!! (That paragraph about the blood in the soil -- WOW. Simply stellar!)

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Christine Finlayson's avatar

What a fascinating, powerful story this is! I can't wait to read Part 2--was completely engrossed and anxious to know what happens next. Nicely done!

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